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I'm just a girl
With ruffled hair
And sore eyes
I'm just a girl
Who likes to write
And can't draw
I'm just a girl
With childish fantasies
And faded dreams
I'm just a girl
With cold hands
And a warm heart

That no one can see.
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DeathWeaponSoulEvans Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013   General Artist
That was... so cool. :iconinucryplz: you're awesome.
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Calypso-Dawn Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013   Writer
Oh, thank you so much! And thank you for the watch, it is very appreciated!! ^^
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DeathWeaponSoulEvans Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013   General Artist
No problem. :iconsoulsmirkplz: You're a talented poet.
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Calypso-Dawn Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013   Writer
hehe, thank youuu. owo
:iconyuihugplz:
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DeathWeaponSoulEvans Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013   General Artist
:iconinuhugshippoplz:
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ShiningMidnightStar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student Writer
That was really pretty...
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Calypso-Dawn Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much Star!! :hug:
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ShiningMidnightStar Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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Merikuu Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really sweet in a sad way. Beautifully written(:
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:iconcalypso-dawn:
Calypso-Dawn Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much, I appreciate it! :hug:
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Merikuu Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome^^
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laffinia Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
so true.
well written
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:iconcalypso-dawn:
Calypso-Dawn Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012   Writer
I appreciate it, thanks. :aww:
:hug:
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oceanofstars Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Grammatically, I think it should be "With cold hands".
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Calypso-Dawn Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012   Writer
Oh! I didn't see that, thank you for catching that! :)
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oceanofstars Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
No problem! Everything else seemed fine, though ^^ thanks for posting this?
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Calypso-Dawn Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012   Writer
You are welcome!! :D
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InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautifully written. wonderful job:)
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Calypso-Dawn Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012   Writer
Thank you very much, I appreciate the feedback! :hug:
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InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, keep writingXD:)
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Calypso-Dawn Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012   Writer
Oh my goodness! A fave, a llama, and a watch?!?! I really don't know what to say other than THANK YOU! :heart:
:iconletmehugyouplz: :iconsupertighthugplz:
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InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)) haha you are veery welcome:) it was my pleasure
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