This is a journal entry. I really hate to be all snobby about this because really, I've written some shit that's gotten more attention than it deserved in the past, but honestly...What is this saying thata lot of teen angst before it has not? Think about that, writer, if you really are serious about bettering your craft. And I'm being genuine here.
Wow this sounds very powerful; even though I don't know if u did it by intention or not but this sounds really ironic to people who just won't accept who we are; it's almost like as if it's some sort of sarcasm towards those who simply do not accept our identity Short, simple, yet POWERFUL ^^ Good job